Today,I am angry.

In school ,r was  angried,he  was  cut  in line,but our maths teacher was angry of r does this  .

I am worry about my classmate.they are angry.

so today I am angry.

“Today,I am angry.” 这句话本身没有语法错误。

“was angried”不是正确的英语表达,应该改为“was angry”。正确的句子应该是:“In school, R was angry,”。

“he was cut in line,but our maths teacher was angry of r does this.” 这句话中有多处错误:

“cut in line”虽然可以表达“插队”的意思,但更常用的表达是“cut in front of the line”或简单地“cut in line”作为短语使用时前面不加“was”(这里可能想表达的是被动语态,但用法不正确)。如果要改正,可以说“he was cutting in line”或“someone cut him in line”。

“but our maths teacher was angry of r does this”中,“was angry of”不是正确的表达,应该使用“was angry at”或“was angry because”;“ranzuming does this”也不符合语法,因为这里应该使用过去时,且“does”是第三人称单数现在时形式。正确的句子可能是:“but our maths teacher was angry at R for doing this.”

“I am worry about my classmate.” 中,“am worry”不是正确的现在进行时表达,应该使用“am worried”。正确的句子是:“I am worried about my classmates.”同时,注意“classmate”变为了复数形式“classmates”,因为从上下文推测,作者担心的是不止一个同学。

“they are angry. so today I am angry.” 这句话本身在语法上没有错误,但“so”在这里可能稍显冗余,不过它确实表达了因果关系。如果要去掉“so”并保持句子流畅,可以说:“They are angry. Today, I am angry too.”

综上所述,原文中的语法和单词错误主要包括时态错误、介词使用不当、动词形式错误以及可能的拼写错误。


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